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Friday, 18 October 2013

Criminals at Sports Camp

Walt: write a narrative


Sports Camp

On a Monday we came to school for the week of our lives. It was the day that I've been waiting for. It was finally sports camp. We were going on a bus to travel all the way to Matamata. We loaded the bus and hopped in. My took pictures. As we started to go down Eastview road, we waved goodbye to our mums and dads.

Its been two hours and a half and we are finally here. Mr Hendricks send us to our cabins. But there were 12 beds and the were 17 boys. So Mr Hendricks brought Trey, Tre, Charlie, Jalal and me to go to a motel. When we got there we unpacked our stuff and chose a bed. Charlie and Jalal Was bunk beds and Trey and Tre was on there own bed. Unlucky for me I slept on the ground. Mr Hendricks came to collect us for cross country. We watched the cross country team and they tried there best. After that Alisi and Kaho went to golf, Chase and Taina went kayaking, Trey and Auytum went shooting and Talia and I went to archery.

After that we went back to our cabins and we were shocked. Our door was open. We looked inside to see if anything was stolen. In fact stuff were stolen. food have been stolen. We told Mr Hendricks and he told Andrew. He gave us a key so when we go out we lock it.

After the two days we were still looking for the criminals. Then I had an idea. It was cameras. We went to tell Andrew my idea. So we all rushed to our cabins and put it up. We waited for 3 hours and we went inside and looked at the videos from the camera. After an hour and a half I nearly gave up but then I saw something. It was a little rat. It ran across the room and it went in my bag. it dragged my bar and went in a hole behind the cardboard. After that we looked in the cardboard and we saw a hole. Then we called the removers. They remove bugs and rats. After one hour they came and they caught all the rats. There were 25 rats. I looked in my bag and there was a hole in it. The last day of sports camp and the week was fast. We loaded the bus and went home.

Camp was exciting and I had nothing else to instead of sports camp to my parents after I came back. I want to go back.

My theme is to never steal because if you steal, you will end up at a bad place.

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