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Friday, 23 August 2013

Bad skin day

Walt: write a story with a theme.

Bad skin day

Once upon a time on a beautiful sunshiny day Jack went with his family to the beach to have a swim and a picnic. They were looking for a space to have the picnic. They didn't find a picnic spot any where. “Why can’t we spread the tablecloth on the sand”, said Jack.

As soon as the family finished their picnic they went of to have a swim in the clear blue sea. “ Put the sunscreen on guys”, said mum. “I don’t need sunscreen for my skin because I'm a big boy”, said Jack. “ But I'm bigger than you and I'm using sunscreen”, said mum. “ OK” said Jack. “ I’ll get my own sunscreen from the car”, said Jack. But when Jack went and got the sunscreen, he grabbed the fly spray instead. He sprayed all over his body and he made a ugly face. “ This smells like hmm, what is it again, who cares I just want to go for a swim”, said Jack. He tossed the the fly spray in the car and zoomed to the water. But on the can, on the cushion sign and it said that the spray is not allowed in water.

Jack dived in the water and he was playing in it. But after few minutes the family had to go home. The family was calling out to Jack. Jack came out and he looked horrifying. All of the people from the beach screamed and they were panicking. The family wasn't scared. They took Jack to the doctor. The doctor said that he had fly spray id-us. “ To turn him back you have to spray him with sunscreen”, said the doctor. after three days Jack was back.

The theme is to take care of your skin.

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