Tuesday, 27 November 2012
Tuesday, 6 November 2012
Going Back In Time
Walt:write a story in sequence
Going back in time
It was Saturday and it was the biggest free fall jump. A daredevil called Jack was lifted into the atmosphere. It was the riskiest thing that anybody could think of.
Jack was lifted in a helium balloon. The balloon popped so Jack jumped. Jack went back in time. He saw that earth rearranged. Jack landed on a tree. Crack went the tree. He still survived. He became an adventurer. Dinosaurs were everywhere. He felt terrified.
“I can’t walk to the portal, I’m too terrified of the dinosaurs”.
“No I can do this, I am fearless”.
Jack walked across the dinosaurs. He picked some giant leaves and put around himself so he could look like the dinosaurs. He stomped his feet like a real dinosaur thump, thump, thump, thump, thump, thump. He had a heart of a lion. When he reached the portal he felt proud of himself.
He went through the portal and landed on Mexico. He was now the bravest man on earth.
The theme of this story is to be brave.
Going back in time
It was Saturday and it was the biggest free fall jump. A daredevil called Jack was lifted into the atmosphere. It was the riskiest thing that anybody could think of.
Jack was lifted in a helium balloon. The balloon popped so Jack jumped. Jack went back in time. He saw that earth rearranged. Jack landed on a tree. Crack went the tree. He still survived. He became an adventurer. Dinosaurs were everywhere. He felt terrified.
“I can’t walk to the portal, I’m too terrified of the dinosaurs”.
“No I can do this, I am fearless”.
Jack walked across the dinosaurs. He picked some giant leaves and put around himself so he could look like the dinosaurs. He stomped his feet like a real dinosaur thump, thump, thump, thump, thump, thump. He had a heart of a lion. When he reached the portal he felt proud of himself.
He went through the portal and landed on Mexico. He was now the bravest man on earth.
The theme of this story is to be brave.
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